When writing any work of fiction, the most important thing an author can do is include a powerful narrative. When the narrative is a well-woven tale full of surprising twists and turns, the reader is powerless to put the book down. When problems arise for the protagonist, assuming the protagonist evokes strong emotions from the reader, the reader simply must know how these problems will be dealt with. Interestingly, Goodbye, Columbus accomplishes its goal of entertainment (because yes, Philip Roth didn’t write this for the purpose of exposing ‘radical economic change’ in the Jewish community) by doing the most overlooked element in most memorable stories: world building.
Reading Goodbye, Columbus in 2019 presents a major problem to any reader born after the 1950s, as the narrative is explicitly focused on a blossoming relationship between Brenda and Neil, a young couple in 1950s. While not inherently problematic, as the story progresses Neil persuades Brenda, quite poorly, into getting a diaphragm for his personal pleasure. In the final chapter, Mrs. Patimkin finds the diaphragm under Brenda’s lavish sweater collection, sending her into a state of shock and horror. After receiving the letter from her mother detailing her findings, Brenda is sent into a similar state of shock and horror. The problem for the modern reader is the contemporary decision society has made on the issue of conception- almost anywhere, it’s socially acceptable to engage in premarital sex and use contraception blockers.
The reader would be left in quite the dilemma if this hard-hitting conclusion held no emotional weight. Sixty pages of supposed sins buildup, finally exposed to the outside world, yet the reader still completely sides with Brenda and Neil, who did nothing wrong by modern standards. While this isn’t a wrong assessment of the situation, any reader who arrives at this conclusion hasn’t read closely enough. Phillip Roth’s Goodbye, Columbus connects with a modern audience, albeit unintentionally, by Roth’s insane attention to detail.
World-building is often entirely overlooked in the grand scheme of a story because of how seemingly unimportant it is. Usually when leaving the movie theater, the audience remembers the complex twists and turns a story went through, or the wonderful resolution to the conflict, or the strong, relatable characters; however, the world can easily make or break a story. If Star Wars was set on a random space station that was set to destroy a random planet in a random galaxy, absolutely no one would care. It may be enjoyable to watch the characters solve the problems on the random space station, but without the incredible visuals carrying the emotional weight, the wonderful setting with cool gadgets, robots, and the cohabitation of humans with aliens, Star Wars is nothing but a good guys vs. bad guys narrative about a young kid, his hot sister (spoilers, sorry), and a boomer saving some random planets.
In Goodbye, Columbus, Phillip Roth shows the audience- including future writers, screenplay directors, or producers- how to do world-building right. Instead of telling the reader explicitly that the Patimkins are well-off and the Klugmans are relatively poor, Roth simply lets Neil’s reaction to the lush lifestyle of the Patimkins do the talking. Neil describes with incredible detail the home, the old refrigerator, and even goes as far as to describe the bountiful selection of goods inside the fridge. These seemingly minor details themselves aren’t important- it’s Roth’s inclusion of them that help paint the picture of Neil’s life before the Patimkins. This example is essentially the blueprint used throughout the novella: don’t explicitly tell the reader anything, instead let Neil show the common thinking of the time using his inner thoughts and descriptions.
While seemingly unimportant, world-building provides a different way of telling a story. Instead of dumping expository information through dialogue, a character’s reaction to an event, or via the literary flashback, Roth decides to build the hollow world of Goodbye, Columbus by developing it around the characters. Without calling attention to it, Roth beautifully describes everything around Neil to allow the reader to draw his own conclusions. This is a noble goal- allowing the creative mind to work, even when it’s through the creative mind of another.